http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/requests-and-feedback-f22/-t1.htm Got some ideas to give other writers? Need feedback on your work? If so, this thread is for you! Wed, 20 Feb 2008 18:15:36 GMT 10 http://illiweb.com/fa/gothic/logo.png http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/requests-and-feedback-f22/-t1.htm http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/requests-and-feedback-f22/feed-back-this-t31.htm green jell-o there once was a little man who drove to work in a van what he never knew may have killed you oh feel bad for that poor little man there once was little girl who loved to spin and twirl she'd fall on the ground from spinning around oh remember that that glad little girl one day very earl' in the morn' drove that poor little man by the shore of the cold frothy sea where he could barely see through the cold misty air of the morn' spinning ... Requests and Feedback Wed, 20 Feb 2008 18:15:36 GMT http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/requests-and-feedback-f22/feed-back-this-t31.htm#103 http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/requests-and-feedback-f22/feed-back-this-t31.htm