http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/-t1.htm Thu, 21 Aug 2008 17:29:30 GMT 10 http://illiweb.com/fa/gothic/logo.png http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/-t1.htm http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/chapter-1-belong-to-yourself-t65.htm Starlight Vixen This is chapter 1 of Windsong... Hope you like! ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ The sound of drums and flutes from the festival below was barely audible over the laughter and shrieks echoing through the treetops. One particular tree, a thick-trunked oak, towered proudly over the others, casting its shadow across the dancers as they moved in unison around the large bonfire in the center of the clearing. Chanting could be heard as well; hauntingly beautiful melodies that followed the flutes and harps ... Fantasy Thu, 21 Aug 2008 17:29:30 GMT http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/chapter-1-belong-to-yourself-t65.htm#192 http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/chapter-1-belong-to-yourself-t65.htm http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/chapter-untitled-t64.htm Starlight Vixen This is part of a chapter in Windsong... yeah. It's the sequel to Ashen Moonlight (strange. I've done more on the sequel than the first book.) and I'm kinda proud of it. Anywho, enjoy! ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Kiera peered into the forge. The blacksmith hadn’t noticed her arrival; he was still hammering a red-orange bar of steel, humming to the beat of his hammer-strokes. The notes struck Kiera like wind on a glass chime. There was magic in his voice—not enough to give any ill affect to visitors, ... Fantasy Thu, 21 Aug 2008 16:54:04 GMT http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/chapter-untitled-t64.htm#191 http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/chapter-untitled-t64.htm http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/shadows-and-sunlight-t56.htm Starlight Vixen This is the prologue so far for my latest novel, Ashen Moon (title pending). Feedback would be very much appreciated! ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ The sun hung low in the sky, and the light shone almost bloody across the landscape. The only shadows withered beneath crumbling stones and behind the shafts of ancient, rotting arrows still grimly erected in the remains of what had once been bones, but now turned to dust at the slightest whisper of wind. The wind didn’t sing anymore. For more than ... Fantasy Tue, 19 Aug 2008 16:53:09 GMT http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/shadows-and-sunlight-t56.htm#181 http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/shadows-and-sunlight-t56.htm http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/excerpt-1-jay-s-death-t43.htm Starlight Vixen Author's note: Theis is just an excerpt from my novel, so if you don't recognize the characters, that's alright. I'm just looking for feedback on my writing style. ~*~ --~*~-- ~*~ The first rays of sun always seemed to fall in Arkai’s face, no matter where he slept. With a groan, he sat up, rubbing his eyes and yawning as the cool morning air ruffled his hair. In the beds next to him, Tinsha, Seoras, and Chiadu still slept, so, after grabbing his soft doeskin boots and pulling them on, he ... Fantasy Thu, 28 Feb 2008 19:23:46 GMT http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/excerpt-1-jay-s-death-t43.htm#131 http://fictioncraving.heavenforum.com/fantasy-f10/excerpt-1-jay-s-death-t43.htm